30/05/2026
The strongest pitches I've ever read had one thing in common - they knew exactly which lines would appeal most to an editor.
That line is almost never the one the founder leads with. It's usually buried - three paragraphs in, said almost as an aside, because to the person living it, it feels obvious. But to the rest of us, it’s the story!
Part of my job is finding it. A mum who built a multi-award-winning beauty brand from a shea butter balm she made for her son during his chemotherapy treatment - that’s the human story. And that’s the client story that ran in Platinum magazine, on MailOnline and The Sun Online, in OK! - because it's the story a reader will want to read.
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