10/08/2026
“My daughter’s new swimming teacher is strict, and I love it!”
I didn’t expect a swim lesson to stop me mid-scroll, but that’s the hook of a LinkedIn post I came across this week, and I read the whole thing.
Right before it, I’d gone past “Such a great career day” and “Last week,” (both perfectly nice, and I’m sure the posts were too). Here’s the deal: openers like those tell me where the post is headed before I’ve met anyone in it, so I feel like I already know how it ends and I keep scrolling.
The swimming hook was different. It gave me a specific person. A small moment. An opinion I didn’t see coming. And a reason to find out what happens next (how strict? why does she love it? I needed to know).
I read captions all day for work, so I’ve started writing down the hooks that make me stop. If you run your camp’s or school’s Instagram, I’d bet you have one sitting in your notes app right now, like something the director said to a new family at pickup, or what a counselor told you about the first morning of camp. That’s a hook.
So tell me, what’s the best hook you’ve read lately? I’m keeping a list, and yours might make it.